Reviewed, Revised and Reprinted

Asking for reviews was a great idea, until the reviews came back.

Half of the reviewers loved the book, the other half didn't.

What to do? Listen to those who didn't love the book and ask what could be changed, of course.

Improvements included:

1. No references to dying, angels or spirits
2. Give Anthony a life (a back story)!
3. Show the story, don't tell it (describe in dialogue)

Oddly enough, the first point was the most difficult to accept because the book would become so different, The other two were easier. Anthony's back story was easy and fun to write. The dialogues were more of a challenge since there were so many. Once I got started though, I found that I had plenty of dialogues in me, and they made a strong positive difference to the whole book.

Well done reviewers!
​Well done ME!

Revised cover